I think you're in the UK, aren't you?
If so, here's a list of skate parks. Ideally somewhere with a decent bowl is good, but any reasonable banking should help.
At the moment I'd say your stance is too long, so try some Bosu ball practice to help you get the feeling of stacking on the front foot.
Commented on Feel like they are getting better, de...
14 Jan 03:05
John Kuras That's really looking like you're making progress 👍
One thing I would comment on is the second turn. I appreciate it's tricky because of the design of the bowl, but you're hunching over and leaving your coffee cup arm behind you.
If you could lift the cup to the rim that could be helpful.