That looks pretty good to me 👍
I'd say the main thing to work on now would be to relax more. Your body seems very tense and I think that's stopping you from raising your elbows which is restricting your compress/ extend.
Once you get that, it should help you be able to lower your head in the rectangular bowl.
Replied on Per the suggestion of Scott Wagenblas...
14 Nov 07:31
John Kuras In your original clip, you appear to be rolling down a bank that has a rail on the left.
That's a good place to start practicing dropping in as you can start with the wheels on the flat section and roll down, then have the front wheels land on the slope and finally start with the back wheels on the slope too.
If there's someone else around who is dropping in, ask them for a bit of help and get them to pull your coffee cup arm forward as you start to drop which should stop you from standing on the back leg and having the board scoot out from under you.