Nice, improvements!
I think you're bringing your back arm foward a little early when you travel up the wave going into the top turn. I do this as well, although I think your timing is better than mine. What I've noticed is that bringing the arm forward too soon can lead to a slight counter rotation at the start of the top turn (like the first turn of the second wave) which blocks the upper body from twisting back to the foam in one fluid motion.
If you look at this still from the top turn side by side video of Ant and Clay, Ant's back arm comes foward at the bottom of the wave while Clay's arm comes forward as part of his twist at the top of wave.
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23 Apr 03:23
I think if you commited to more of a bottom turn you would have setup that first top turn in a better spot.