For your second week, that's not bad at all 👍
To help you kiss your knees, you need to get your feet more at 45 degrees from the nose, at the moment they're forcing you into a side-on stance.
This also means you're tending to have your left foot and left arm forward, but you would normally walk left foot, right arm.
Lift the left elbow out to the side and try to put it in your back pocket.
That, combined with getting the knees to point in the direction you're going will help you twist and look through the turn as well as making it easier to compress and extend.
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05 Aug 14:35
John Dennis The coffee cup is always in the rear hand. The problem many people have (including me!) is their front arm getting in their way, so "putting the elbow in the back pocket" is a good way to help prevent that 🙂
To do it successfully you really need to make sure your weight is stacked over your front foot, ie you should be able to lift your back foot off the board. If you can't, you need to get your hips forward.
Hope that helps 👍