Rhys Llewelyn Nice!
A couple of other suggestions:
When you're coming down the ramp at the start, you look rather awkward and hunched over. Maybe try to keep your head up and compress the front leg.
The other thing is when you're turning, your left arm appears to be getting in your way and stopping you twisting as much as you could.
Try lifting the hand and, as Clay says, put your elbow in your back pocket:
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