That's one lovely bowl.
My number one tip would be this: keep your right hand up at sort of shoulder level and a bit more forward. Might sound crazy but AI think that will automatically make you lean more (when appropriate). You are still quite straight up on some of those turns. Give it a try.
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03 Dec 03:30
Great bus to be on. We've got t-shirts.
To me it mostly looks like you're overthinking it. I've seen you way smoother than that. I think you're trying to get your head lower?
My tip would be to put something on the coping to help you do the turns on that section in the back. Like two cans of beer on opposite sides. Instead of trying so hard just look at those (and point with your back hand) You body will sort itself out.
Plus you can have a beer.