That looks pretty good 👍
Two things I'd suggest:
1) Shorten your stance a bit by bringing the back foot closer to the front foot.
2) Lift the front arm up and out of the way so you're putting the elbow in your back pocket.
That will help you twist and look back to the foam instead of looking at the nose of the board.
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16 Nov 03:48
Sebastian Jimenez Regarding the arm, yes, lift the elbow and move it back.
Look at the replays of the Live Chats and you'll see Clay mention it quite a lot.
Also look on YouTube for the Walk up/ pop up series that Clay did, there's loads of good advice there 👍