That's looking fantastic 👍
I'd suggest the thing you need to work on most next is your twist at the top of the wave.
You've completed the top turn, but you're still looking down the line instead of back at the foam.
As Clay says, lift your front arm and put your elbow in your back pocket.
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30 Apr 21:26
Coryn Daniel is probably the best person to talk to.
She and others go to The Wave in Bristol which is about the only place you're going to find reliable surf without a much longer drive 😕