Spot on G

You a deep into compression/contraction. This makes you heavy and keeps you low on the wave. There is more potential at the top of the wave. Extension/expansion will get you there. Do the opposite and you will achieve a new line

It’s where you look. Vertical is up but you look a the safe option of 10 o clock. It’s intrinsic to be safe. Try hold the turns longer and it gets slowly easier

It looks good already. On the top turns a straight back would deliver more power through the turns as well as more lift up the waves. It’s also creates more space to see and feel more

Nice closing turn. If you waited for the wave to stand up rather than racing towards the shoulder you could have got more potential to work with on the wave

It’s a great frame to move from. Puts you on front foot ( accelerator) and helps with balance and posture.

Work on the extension to go up it opens up time , space and more wave potential to use speed.

Slow the turns down to compliment the speed of the wave. It seems you fight the turn and do it hard and abruptly. Look where you want to travel to then hold the turn until you cover the distance. It will look and feel better

Yes

Hold the turn longer as its is more hydro dynamic than going straight. You seem to cut them short by nervously looking back down the line. Taking it back to the power source is a reset on the wave to set up the next turn. Try not cut it short and just be aware when you do. The awareness is the first step. Second is commitment to a full turn